Monthly Archives: August 2007

The heat is on

I was going to quote something subtler from the lyrics of that Glenn Frey song, but when I looked them up I discovered nothing quotable. It’s amazing how little substance some popular songs have when you scrutinize them. When I … Continue reading

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Sizzlin’

Today is supposed to be another 100+ degree day. Perhaps as high as 102° with a humidex of 112°. Just a few degrees below the temperature at which the turkey is baking in The Accidental Tourist. (“Is this the Thanksgiving … Continue reading

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Triple digits + General Slocum + Torchwood finale

We hit a hundred degrees here today. I haven’t been outside more than a few minutes since early this morning, but when I went to get the mail it was aitch owe tee hot. We keep the house at about … Continue reading

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Chapped

Made some progress into new territory on the story in progress this morning. I started by editing the last page or so and then convinced myself to keep going and wrote perhaps seven hundred words. I’m getting a better feel … Continue reading

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Fight Club, Torchwood style

Another morning of editing. Whenever I find myself bogged down in plot, I usually resort to editing. It’s a bit of a trap that is sometimes hard to break out of. I spend my morning revising up to a point, … Continue reading

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Out of time

I’ve finally caught up with myself in revising the current story from restricted third to first person. At first, it looks a simple task, changing “he” to “I” throughout, but there really is a subtle but important difference between the … Continue reading

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Torchwood overdose

I’m up to about 3000 words on the new story in progress, but I decided yesterday to recast it from third person to first person. Heavily influenced by reading Ross MacDonald. I went through The Ivory Grin this weekend and … Continue reading

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Perchance to dream

Eureka took a different stab at the old “it was all a dream” plot device. It’s hard to do anymore without leaving an ugly taste in the viewers’ mouths. I have mixed feelings about how they handled it. The denouement … Continue reading

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Captain Jack will get you high tonight

Billy Joel was singing about the drug dealer in his neighborhood—and of course there’s Captain Jack Sparrow—but I’m thinking about Torchwood’s Captain Jack Harkness. I finally figured out who John Barrowman reminds me of, both in appearance and line delivery: … Continue reading

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Something I haven’t done in ages

I started a new short story this morning. I only got about two pages written, but it felt good to be under way. I have in-depth knowledge of the character and the circumstances and absolutely no idea of the plot. … Continue reading

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